Title: Wedding Dress
Author: Lucia
Fanfic URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Lucia5/
Reviewer: JJ’s Love @ http://jjforeverdbsk.webs.com/
Title : -9/10 As this is connected with songs,the title will do.
Foreword : -9/10
Appearance : -10/10 Love the background it’s so smooth and the poster is beautiful too.
Plot : -14/15 I read a lot of stories and this plot was something that I see in a lot of stories, but still it has this feeling…how should I say..something’s definitely different from all the others.
Flow : -9/10
Creativity/Originality : -9/10
Spelling/Grammar/ Vocabulary : -9/10 Uhm I think I didn’t see any mistakes :D.
Characterization : -9/10
Writing Style : -10/10 Again gonna say that i love your writing style! J
Overall Enjoyment : -5/5 Even for a one shot I think it could be a bit longer.
Bonus: -5/5
Total: -98/105
Congratulations! J
Haha we meet again :D, this was good, all your stories are good,even through I actually only read stuff with DBSG but I liked your plots and all.
Keep up the good work.
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Thanks again for your review. I heard you've been busy so it means a lot that you had time to read my story. I already posted the review~~ Thanks again~ byebye!
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