Review for Where U at?

Title: Where U At?

Author: Lucia

Fanfic URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Lucia4/

Reviewer: JJ’s Love @ http://jjforeverdbsk.webs.com/





Title : -10/10 I think the title follows the story..



Foreword : -10/10 Liked your forewords,they gave me uhm the most information which I needed to know.



Appearance : -10/10 I Liked the poster,it caught my attention, cute and simple,I like simple things, the background was good,it didn’t bother me to actually read the story.



Plot : -14/15 I must say I read a lot of stories and this plot was unique,just slightly there were things that most fanfics have, but oh well I won’t be too harsh.



Flow : -10/10



Creativity/Originality : -9/10



Spelling/Grammar/ Vocabulary : -9/10 There were a few mistakes, so I give you an advice to pay attention to your spelling,don’t rush too much when you type, and your vocabulary is really good! .



Characterization : -10/10



Writing Style : -10/10 Really loved it, from the way how it looks like and ending with how you described everything.



Overall Enjoyment : -5/5 Even for a one shot I think it could be a bit longer.



Bonus: -5/5



Total: -102/105



Congratulations!

I really loved the story! It was really exciting,actually more refreshing for me after all the rated stuff I read :D, well I hope you’ll keep writing more stories and don’t forget: you’ll always improve!

Keep up the good work.

<< JJ’s Love >>