Review for His Deceiving Look

Title: His Deceiving Look

Author: Magic Sparks

Fanfic URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/zilliontin0e/

Reviewer: JJ’s Love @ http://jjforeverdbsk.webs.com/





Title : -8/10 The title sounds nice,but I think it doesn’t suit that much.



Foreword : -10/10 Your forewords were awesome! As soon as I read then I wanted to read the story, good job!!



Appearance : -10/10 The poster is really beautiful, yet quite simple, the background makes reading quite easy.



Plot : -15/15 Your plot caught my attention from the first chapter.So I give you the highest score here!



Flow : -10/10 It was perfect.



Creativity/Originality : -10/10 In my opinion it was really creative!At least I never read anything with a similar plot like you have.



Spelling/Grammar/ Vocabulary : -9/10 Everything was good, except for some mistakes.



Characterization : -10/10



Writing Style : -10/10 Loved your writing style,notonly the story has an interesting plot but the writing style makes you want to read it!



Overall Enjoyment : -5/5 I soo enjoyed reading it! I liked everything in it~



Bonus: -5/5



Total: -102/105



Congratulations! You have a really high score!

I loved your story,it caught me from the first words, I loved your writing style.

Well there’s just one thing I can say ….

Keep up the good work! And just work a bit on the things where you lost a few points!

JJ’s Love @ http://jjforeverdbsk.webs.com